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The Adoration Poem
Contributed by
blueteelah
on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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All the riches in the world do not compare to
you
Even the lapis of deepest blue
Are pale and hollow compared to your eyes
The ruddy ruby does not do justice to your
lips
And only the finest strains of gold and platinum are what should adorn your lovely
brow
Diamonds are trifle and emeralds lack luster
Compared to the shining beauty of your soul
Copyright ©
blueteelah
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2003-05-14 13:35:00]
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Re: The Adoration Poem
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by tease_whizz on
Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 01:10:58 PM AEST
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| beautiful...i love the imagery and the visual pictures you create. this is a touching tribute for the one you love. thank you for your comment on my poem 'white noise coma', i hope to read more of your work in the future. Kate x |
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Re: The Adoration Poem
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by Apartment213 on
Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 02:12:20 AM AEST
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very expressive creates a lot of imagery
KENNY |
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