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DEAR YOU
Contributed by
colinb
on
Saturday, 23rd March 2013 @ 05:27:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Eye's glazed,
Life is hazed,
Wished to faze away,
Then you came my way,
Your name unkown,
Inside beauty known,
Words you have sown,
My mind you have blown,
In my soul you have flown,
Your poem im amazed,
The words you say,
Heart is a blaze,
My eye's star gaze,
With you i wish to drift away,
Garden of eden we will stay,
Outside beauty mystery,
Your heart so pure,
My heart you lurer,
Your words cure,
For you i'll endurer,
When life is impure,
Colin Bradley.
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colinb
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Re: DEAR YOU
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by emystar on
Monday, 25th March 2013 @ 01:41:22 AM AEST
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Beautiful write.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: DEAR YOU
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by karu on
Monday, 25th March 2013 @ 11:00:53 AM AEST
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| simple and sweet |
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Re: DEAR YOU
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by alicewhite on
Friday, 29th March 2013 @ 06:30:15 PM AEST
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memorable and soo beautiful,
who ever has inspired you should feel humbled,
how lovely,xxx |
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Re: DEAR YOU
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2014 @ 09:54:06 AM AEST
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Beautifully expressed, Colin:)
A lucky person to provoke such lovely sentiments from you. I hope you shared this with them.
Good job!
~Scorp |
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Re: DEAR YOU
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 8th May 2014 @ 09:59:33 AM AEST
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this is exquisite, each line is so powerful and
heartfelt, each word so well placed, so beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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