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when i died
Contributed by
alicewhite
on
Friday, 22nd March 2013 @ 07:31:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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when i was a baby
when i was a child
when i was one
i was christened
babtized
under the water
the priest put my head
the church was cold
while the scripture
was read
later that night
i couldnt breath
my mum put the kettle on
and filled my room with steam
my temperature rose
as she rocked me to and throw
till she called an ambulance
and to the hospital
we did go
my mother says
she cried
as the doctors informed her
i was near death
expect the worse
they said to her
while they experimented with new drugs
to keep me alive,
to help me survive
to strengthen my damaged lungs
a priest arrived
and said the last rights
as my drunken father
stood by his side,
they had to resuscitate once or twice
as my soul left my body
and went towards the light,
but i was sent back
as an angel to fight
and learn through my heartache
to teach wrong from right
my heart beats and i breath
doubt all you want
i know i am right
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Re: when i died
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by emystar on
Friday, 22nd March 2013 @ 07:57:21 PM AEST
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So you're just a walking angel.
I have no doubts at all 'cause I flat lined in the ambulance once.
Some people will never believe you and there's those that need to be taught.
It's all good from where I'm sitting.
Very powerful write.
Huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy
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Re: when i died
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by deusdeira on
Saturday, 23rd March 2013 @ 12:39:06 AM AEST
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| death can be a blessing when you come back from it :) beautiful write. I for one, am glad you survived. |
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Re: when i died
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 27th April 2014 @ 02:00:12 PM AEST
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you lay it all out on the line, i love your strong
spirit, beautiful poem,
hugs n' love nessa
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