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Bed Time
Contributed by
Bhoy123
on
Thursday, 21st March 2013 @ 11:21:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Painkillers before bed
Easier to sleep with a clear head
Float out of this life
Get away from all the strife
Time for bed, pour another drink
I feel myself closer to the brink
Float out of this life
Get away from all the strife
Everything becomes a haze
Reminisce about better days
Float out of this life
Get away from all the strife
Eyes become heavy
Breathing becomes steady
Floating out of this life
Getting away from the strife
The sun begins to rear it's head
I begin to stir in my bed
Time to survive another day
Repeat the process and pray
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Bhoy123
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2013-03-21 11:21:35]
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Re: Bed Time
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by dvtpdw on
Thursday, 21st March 2013 @ 01:50:16 PM AEST
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| Written with a poet's clarity of words and life. You can feel the pull of each word and follow along with each pace of each strike. Truth in words so easy to relate to. Great write. Thank you for sharing, P |
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Re: Bed Time
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by northernlights on
Friday, 22nd March 2013 @ 01:49:20 AM AEST
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| Floating out of this life....... slumber bringing welcome relief from strife and surviving another day.Bed Time can become an oasis to a troubled mind if sleep can be found. Relatable writing that will be just as much of an oasis to those who know this all too well. |
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