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Doubt, Buddha, and Me
Contributed by
Sasha
on
Tuesday, 19th March 2013 @ 01:01:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Hey Doubt, you hold me in fascination
Watching you move in your far-away world
I carved a stone Buddha, his restraint yours
Your heady intelligence, his new dharma
The smile on his face was incomplete
And so I carved him your sunlit eyes, half open
Your silent mischief and his ancient wisdom
Didn’t quite know how to vie for equal space
And so I gave him a little of your thoughts,
Holding back a little of you that is all mine
As mysteries unravel, and life unwinds
I carved Buddha attributes on a dark angel
Life will go on parallel, yours and mine
Intersecting moments we seldom fathom
Times when life dances formless and abstract
Love in abstraction, not the people we are…
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Sasha
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2013-03-19 01:01:30]
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Re: Doubt, Buddha, and Me
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 19th March 2013 @ 01:57:09 AM AEST
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| Words from your own personal journey in life,observations take on an open interpretation for the reader and as I see the complexities of light and shade, of peace and doubt,and bring my own complexities there is a freedom of understanding and expression which takes on a life of its own,,,,,,,times when life dances formless and abstract. A gift from the poet, Thank you. |
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Re: Doubt, Buddha, and Me
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by Lee on
Thursday, 21st March 2013 @ 06:59:35 AM AEST
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An interesting read. Many of the lines provide a fascinating insight into the journey of one's possible spiritual self. Wonderful poem!
-L. |
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Re: Doubt, Buddha, and Me
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by karu on
Wednesday, 27th March 2013 @ 01:55:34 PM AEST
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God bless you
nice creation
i remember speech of Budhha.
Bhudham saranam gachhami
sangham sranam gachhami
dharamam sharnam gachhami
actualy i belong to Budha's place
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