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i feel like im in hell

Contributed by MJP on Monday, 18th March 2013 @ 09:54:17 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

Drownin in stress its effecting me even when stuffs straight my nervs handle me im tryin to get straight but nobody care to motavate me no support not even from my family but that aint goin stop me when that bread come in and dinner rdy im ganna be the only one at the table gettin heavy not just me though my pockets goin be extra swoll healthier then a most so when your situation gets sick dont call me cuz yall fail to see i just wanted to be apart of the family id do anything and yall still against me blind to see i just wanted yall to love me but now im drownin in the sea its getting hard to see light fadin away its gettin hard to breath i started by myself so i guess thats how its goin be i use to have my dad but he left me so depressing all alone not scared of the dark but my fears stronge i need to make a new past im moving on ima see duh lite ima start a new life and live stronge you goin hear about it in the next song but i dont exspect yall to listen cuz yall will never understand cuz your not in my position youve been together forever ive been tryin to get in but yall dont hear me and that why i yell but im wrong for that well listen i feel like im in hell

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