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Die or Mend
Contributed by
Wordsmith123
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Saturday, 16th March 2013 @ 09:43:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Society's grip, held firm by words,
Squeezes life from tight-knit herds.
Blind to that which sight could mend;
Deaf to all but common trend.
The beast that rears its ugly head
By tattered dreams is daily fed.
"Join or die," it once was penned,
Now, perhaps, it's, "die or mend."
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Re: Die or Mend
(User Rating: 1 ) by LilDrifter on
Monday, 13th May 2013 @ 07:21:37 PM AEST (User
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Great piece, it flows perfectly.
Particularly enjoyed the line "Squeezes life from tight-knit herds".
Thanks for sharing ! |
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