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Scars
Contributed by
chlois
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Saturday, 16th March 2013 @ 02:50:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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I long to feel you against my skin.
Every release is like another sin.
The pleasure of pain is undeniably fine.
All i would do, to make you mine.
Your metal body shines in my eye.
Flowing red, will tell you why.
I cut real deep to make me feel.
Scars to explain, my story is real..
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chlois
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2013-03-16 14:50:32] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Scars
(User Rating: 1 ) by mvvenkataraman on
Sunday, 17th March 2013 @ 11:48:11 AM AEST (User
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What I express may be vulgar or bad
But, I humbly feel that that is an answer
God has created us giving us a body
And without others' assistance
We can derive pleasure skillfully
We need not cut or hang ourselves
We must shrewdly accept this life
And try to make maximum bliss
Out of it using wit and wisdom
Hope I am clear and proper
A different comment to guide
God always blesses us dear.
mvvenkataraman
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