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If
Contributed by
LetYourFeelingsOut
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Thursday, 14th March 2013 @ 04:19:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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If you asked me then
I wouldn't say that i am fine
If you asked me now
I would say i found my smile
If you asked me then
I'd say im hurt
If you asked me then
I'd say id learn to forget
If you asked me then
Little things made me cry
If you asked me now
I'd say ive gone a long way
If you seen me then
I wasnt doing much
If you seen me now
I have changed alot
If you talked to me then
I'd say go away
If you talked to me now
I'd wish you were here
If you warned me then
I would say i love him
If you warned me now
I'd say i should stayed aw
If Id said sorry back then
I wouldnt be here now
If I'd said sorry now
I would be a better person
If? Why?
The questions linger in my mind
Why didnt I ?Where would i be if i did things differently ? !!
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Re: If
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by The_Unknown on
Thursday, 14th March 2013 @ 05:29:19 PM AEST
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Such a simple poem. If I did this, if I did that... If you asked now, if you asked then...
I think that I can feel the change in your attitude through this piece of writing. I can't
say that I know what you're talking about except for a different time in your life,
and I don't know how you have grown or even what you've been through, but that's
the lovely mystery. Poems touch people in different ways. If you look at the relationship between
an author and a reader it's wonderful.... it's real. It's a connection, even if you know nothing but the words
put before you. I guess what I'm telling you is thank you. Thank you for sharing. And I'm happy that
you've found your smile, because I'm sure it's beautiful. We all question what life might be like had we
done something in our past differently. But you wouldn't be who you are today if you had done just one
thing differently, I truly believe that.
"If I'd said sorry back then, I wouldn't be here now." So be happy you didn't say sorry then,
maybe you wouldn't have found your smile.
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Re: If
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by Sagefairy on
Saturday, 16th March 2013 @ 03:06:02 PM AEST
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| Very nice - Overall good phrasing, with a couple misspellings I think (stayed away?). The subject matter - how one's path can change with different actions or reactions... Nice! Blessings, SF |
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Re: If
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by colinb on
Tuesday, 26th March 2013 @ 04:00:08 AM AEST
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| A powerfull insight into ones self a jouney that we all do through life a insight into ourselfs |
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Re: If
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by NightMareShoGun on
Thursday, 28th March 2013 @ 12:44:51 PM AEST
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| niceley done |
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