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Shadows
Contributed by
Kristenbohl
on
Tuesday, 12th March 2013 @ 01:11:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Lost in the dark loneliness of time,
where is the light?
forever gone
with shadows left behind.
Drifting and turning in the cold sea
drowning..
drowning, never ending struggle for air,
buried alive, forever suffocating, never to see the light of day again.
What is left but to die?
To never try, never try to escape this dark damp earth.
Unable to die, the suffering before death,
infinite.
Black as coal is this dark shadow, surrounding, possessing, suffocating.. No life always never ending death.
Unable to survive,
forever a slave to the dagger of pain,
Trapped in the burning cold flames, eating away at the heart of life.
Tree's entangling
around the soul, no dreams left,
only horror
leaving only a shell of the person that was once there.
Copyright ©
Kristenbohl
... [
2013-03-12 01:11:56]
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Re: Shadows
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by Lenny on
Tuesday, 12th March 2013 @ 03:16:10 AM AEST
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| Great poem! Very descriptive. Well done. Keep writing. |
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Re: Shadows
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 12th March 2013 @ 08:22:39 AM AEST
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Great writing.
Welcome to YPDC.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Shadows
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th December 2013 @ 05:28:14 PM AEST
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| Familiar feelings, I like this |
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