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Are you there?
Contributed by
ScribereHabeo
on
Monday, 11th March 2013 @ 11:32:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Hey there what's happening
Just so you know your smile is glistening
But your laughter seems ever distant
Like you avoided me in an instant
I see you but you, and we speak
But our friendship grows weak
I want to tell you how I feel
I want you to know, my love is real
You live three houses down
When I see you, I dont see a frown
Where are you going
Please don't leave me, my tears are flowing
I know that we can be together
But our friendship is under the weather
We used to talk all the time
Now in your silence, I hear a chime
Telling me I need to
Telling me I need you
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ScribereHabeo
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2013-03-11 23:32:57]
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Re: Are you there?
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 12th March 2013 @ 08:28:37 AM AEST
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You should let them read this good write. Poetry has the power to melt hearts.
Hang tuff.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Are you there?
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by Sagefairy on
Tuesday, 12th March 2013 @ 06:53:16 PM AEST
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Ah yes. Been there myself. It can cause an unraveling. You really do have the emotion down - I can almost see a wistful onlooking while the neighbor leaves in the car with someone else. Sad. But good for you that you can get an emotion down on paper that other people can understand, poet!
Blessings, SF |
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Re: Are you there?
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by jordanarce17 on
Thursday, 14th March 2013 @ 11:09:37 AM AEST
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| It was really beautiful and understanding. I understand your feelings and I hope you are okay. |
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Re: Are you there?
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by Sommer on
Sunday, 26th May 2013 @ 12:00:31 AM AEST
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| Yet another beautiful piece. I am growing to very much admire your work. Your style is so honest and emotional. Great read. |
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