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Feeling All Alone
Contributed by
waynster
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Monday, 11th March 2013 @ 09:49:06 AM in AEST
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Feeling all alone
alone is all I feel
Waiting for so long
for my loneliness, someone to steal
I occasionally see you walking
you always pass me by
My heart beckons a hello
but you never even say hi
Tear drops start to form
on the soul inside of me
If only I could look in
I would surely see
Always so quiet
not wanting to open up and speak
So many things I want to say
but I have a spirit that’s so meek
Just once I wish
a look from you I would get
Then I would offer a lovely smile
and some words without regret
It’s been too long being lonely
from this world I want to be free
Please look at me when passing by
your lovely eyes I want to see
Yet I remain in my lonely world
having a spirit that cries with sorrow
I’ll be waiting in my special place
where you’ll walk by tomorrow
If my spirit lets me
I will wipe its tears away
I will open up my world
and find some words to say
I hope you won’t hurt me
and push me back in my shell
I won’t know unless I try
there’s just no way to tell
Written by author: E. Wayne Searles on 6 March 2013
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Re: Feeling All Alone
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by codek on
Monday, 11th March 2013 @ 12:48:53 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed the poem it was a beautiful tribute to unspoken love but you should not just rhyme words to rhyme them it destroys the integrity of the poem |
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Re: Feeling All Alone
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by ScribereHabeo on
Monday, 11th March 2013 @ 11:21:20 PM AEST
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Your poem speaks to me, I'm glad that you posted this keep writing
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Re: Feeling All Alone
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by Archie on
Friday, 10th May 2013 @ 09:32:25 AM AEST
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If you get a chance listen to Stevie Wonder's "Hey Love"
"Hearing your footsteps
I hurry to catch your eye
but as i stand there waiting girl
you just walk on by. . ."
This is how I relate to poems i like by comparing them. Emotionally this poem is there. |
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