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Fools Promise
Contributed by
Janna
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Sunday, 10th March 2013 @ 08:15:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Love was an ocean of promises,
Promises made in haste,
Love was a lie most convincing,
Convincing as the stars in the sky,
Love seemed strong and profound,
Profound like the depths of the bluest sea,
Love was the cure for misery,
But Misery loves company,
Love has shown its true colours, temporary as a rainbow arriving with passion and promise,
Promises that it can never keep,
Love has made us foolish,
And foolish are those who fail to see. Love was like the only rule,
Rules that are often broken,
Like the heart that obeyed for love.
Copyright ©
Janna
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2013-03-10 20:15:15]
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Re: Fools Promise
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by sanders on
Monday, 11th March 2013 @ 03:50:37 AM AEST
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| very nice indeed.. |
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Re: Fools Promise
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by PreciousKitten on
Monday, 11th March 2013 @ 02:31:31 PM AEST
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very true, very unique. i love this poem.
keep writing |
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Re: Fools Promise
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 12th March 2013 @ 09:01:05 AM AEST
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You write like a pro.
Keep it up, you're a natural.
Blessings,
emy |
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