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RIP unborn baby
Contributed by
mikki
on
Thursday, 7th March 2013 @ 10:06:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tiny little body
Quiet little heartbeats.
See this little pea? That's how big you are right now.
But Mommy doesn't know that yet.
Little fingers start to grow
out of tiny little hands.
See this little peanut? That's how big you are right now.
But Mommy doesn't know that yet.
Your tiny legs start to grow
out of your sweet little body.
See this little pencil tip? That's how big your footprints are right now.
But Mommy doesn't know that yet.
But, surprise!
"I'm pregnant."
Suddenly, tragedy.
Weak little heartbeat.
Weak little baby.
See these smiles on our faces? That's how loved you are right now.
But you don't know that yet.
Gone little heartbeat.
Gone little baby.
See us walking into the doctor's office? That's how excited we are right now.
But you don't know that yet.
And, surprise.
"I'm so sorry for your loss."
Sad Mommy.
Lost baby.
See these tears on our faces? That's how much we love you right now.
But you don't know that yet.
Miscarriage.
Tiny baby.
Lost baby.
A baby that had Daddy's eyes and Mommy's smile.
A baby that only wanted to say
I
Love
You.
...
But, surprise.
Mommy doesn't know that yet.
Copyright ©
mikki
... [
2013-03-07 22:06:31]
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Re: RIP unborn baby
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by emystar on
Saturday, 9th March 2013 @ 02:30:23 PM AEST
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Very sad but beautifully written
huggs.Blessings,
emy |
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Re: RIP unborn baby
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by femyed on
Thursday, 14th March 2013 @ 04:22:45 AM AEST
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touching!......
This piece puts me in the shoes of "the parents".
Well written. |
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Re: RIP unborn baby
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by katieliz on
Thursday, 21st March 2013 @ 03:15:04 PM AEST
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| oh this made me cry, very well written |
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Re: RIP unborn baby
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th September 2013 @ 12:09:21 AM AEST
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What an incredibly sad poem, yet, very very well written. Very impressive.
Thank you for sharing this.
Tim |
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