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Tick tock ...tick tock...
Contributed by
Jilli_bean
on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 03:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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stuck in the middle
of a broken relationship
one that doesnt belong
space had brought them together
and time will rip them apart
the clock will tick tock, tick tock
Reminiscing about the past
Reliving what they had
slowly spacing apart
crying over nothing
dying for a break
the clock will tick tock, tick tock
No matter what
Fate will reign
Although so vein
the clock will tick tock, tick tock
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Jilli_bean
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2003-05-14 03:35:00]
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Re: Tick tock ...tick tock...
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by eric on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 05:52:03 AM AEST
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| good idea, but vein/vain? well done |
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Re: Tick tock ...tick tock...
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 05:28:14 PM AEST
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| yes, time stops for no one.. this was great makes one think:) |
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Re: Tick tock ...tick tock...
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by stargazer on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 06:55:29 PM AEST
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You knew from the moment I read this... that I became the biggest fan of this poem. I am ALWAYS the one telling people that time stops for no one... and you may stop but time will just move on around you- so what is the use in stopping?
This was short but the point. It was not over done. You got to your point and it was amazing, never the less. I am your BIGGEST fan of this poem. I love it and will always remember it...
"The clock with tick tock, tick tock"--- doesn't get any realer than that.
Amy |
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