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touch a leaf
Contributed by
ming
on
Friday, 1st March 2013 @ 10:18:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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swish tea
around
the beginning
of Fall
what's
so many
letters
and dreams
in my teacup
a purchase
of reality
doing nothing
hides
everything
hands
shaking
quieter
than mortality
she might
be dead
stripped bare
the rally-round
replaced
by better
silence
with windows
open
and a tongue
numb
who
turns
3 times
and mutters
under
sage smoke
and forgets
which world
haunts true
illusions
rinsed down
the sink
in my blue
dress
cat slaps
drips
and I'm
a wet
dappled
heathen
of a kind
sort.
ming
Copyright ©
ming
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2013-03-01 22:18:14]
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Re: touch a leaf
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by Sagefairy on
Saturday, 2nd March 2013 @ 07:25:59 PM AEST
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| I especially like the last two phrases. It's a neat kind of poem in that it sort of leads you down like stepping stones on a path. Nifty! Blessings, SF |
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Re: touch a leaf
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd March 2013 @ 09:14:20 PM AEST
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aromatic and alive - very much left me shivering and teaming/ steeped in after thoughts.
beautiful poem - well done/ I'd say, you use this English language
well!
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Re: touch a leaf
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by deusdeira on
Monday, 4th March 2013 @ 05:05:21 PM AEST
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| Each one left me with an image in my mind. Telling a story of sorts. This was a very calming poem for me. |
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