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Passing Through
Contributed by
northernlights
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Friday, 1st March 2013 @ 12:41:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The voice of a child echoes in the valley as she
Cries, ‘Daddy, why do my angels always die?'
Wisdom held her hands and gently kissed her
Tears, wiping away her frown with an eternal
Embrace as his voice resonated even now in her dotage
'Were they not there when you needed them?'
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2013-03-01 12:41:34]
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Re: Passing Through
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by spud on
Friday, 1st March 2013 @ 02:13:36 PM AEST
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Hi Anna,
Short, but sweet - and the message is in its
brevity.
Tommy
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Re: Passing Through
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by PreciousKitten on
Friday, 1st March 2013 @ 02:59:13 PM AEST
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Thats pretty deep. i love it though
keep writing |
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Re: Passing Through
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd March 2013 @ 01:06:27 AM AEST
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This is truly beautiful!
God's angels are always with us.
I have thought that maybe even they're assigned to us...like in the movie Always and that last line sums that up...at least for me.
Thank you,
Tim
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Re: Passing Through
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th March 2013 @ 06:06:32 AM AEST
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| This is awesome - so much conveyed in just a few lines and so beautifully written! |
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