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DaRkNeSs
Contributed by
kittiekat
on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 02:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Pitch black as the night grows
No moonlight in sight
It's like your blind
Nothing to see but
Darkness
The only thing you could feel is my teardrops
Dropping down the drain
Overflowing with saddness
Flooding the sink as you feel this
Darkness
The touch is so cold and soothing
Dripping on your skin and soaks it
With my saddness
So deep
Not dry with happiness
The sink keeps flooding
With no light seen
With eyes open wide
Nothing to see but external darkness
And the dripping of the sink
Against you skin
Fulled with wholesome tears
Never ending
With the darkness behind you
Copyright ©
kittiekat
... [
2003-05-14 02:35:00]
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Re: DaRkNeSs
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 05:08:31 AM AEST
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good write. your imagery is amazing - you've captured my feelings pretty well..
afraid_of_fear
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Re: DaRkNeSs
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by LIVINGLIFE on
Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 10:57:36 PM AEST
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| good one of the best i have read maybe because thats my type but great job |
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Re: DaRkNeSs
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by TundraHydra on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 10:19:02 AM AEST
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| darkness what a blessing. keep up the writing. |
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