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pause
Contributed by
ming
on
Tuesday, 26th February 2013 @ 09:13:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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like an unfinished
sentence sharp
thoughts a bit
crooked
in the shadow
of a shadow
lying next
to alone
and a holed
heart heavy
as a hag-stone
on a neck chain.
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ming
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2013-02-26 21:13:11]
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Re: pause
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by dvtpdw on
Tuesday, 26th February 2013 @ 09:28:58 PM AEST
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| Very interesting - it takes the reader on a different journey. Is it up or is it down or does it go around? Like this very much. Very nice write. Thank you for sharing, P |
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Re: pause
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by Sagefairy on
Wednesday, 27th February 2013 @ 01:26:18 AM AEST
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I had to look up hag stone. Unbelievably I had never heard of one. But now I get the analogy. I like the way the words hang. Good work!
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Re: pause
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by Spike on
Thursday, 28th February 2013 @ 04:09:03 AM AEST
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moments as conscious and weighty interludes, breeding gestures and rituals to offset superstitious fears - yeah, I'll buy that. Interesting reflections, as I drink my curdled milk and turn the last page of the last novel in a series...
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