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Only in hell
Contributed by
ravi
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Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
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I once asked ; can there be such a world,
where humans are timid and ants are bold,
where fish walk on land,
and men eat water and sand,
where sky always falls on ground,
and rivers flow faster than sound,
where plants rule the world with ruthless power,
and animals grow on them fruits and flower,
where seas are filled with steam and ice,
and mountains are covered with thick,brown lice,
where earth always ascends high and upwards,
and time always flies slow and backwards.
The devil smiled that smile known so well,
all this can surely happen only in hell.
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ravi
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2003-05-14 00:05:00]
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Re: Only in hell
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by ml02 on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 12:17:04 AM AEST
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| luv it, it made me laugh |
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Re: Only in hell
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 06:40:36 AM AEST
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Very good freeverse. perfect wrapping. command on words, thoughts, and selection of suitable imagery for the selected theme seen in this poem. ah! you can write wonderful poetry ..now you have a matured style of modern freeverse. Ravi.. did you read my " sacrificial Ground" ' infinitely delightful' and ' 'dreadful poison'? if not try to read them to find some delight in our freeverse..
of course this only a request.. as you are very near to my style. venkat |
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