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TREE
Contributed by
colinb
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Monday, 25th February 2013 @ 03:30:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Dead standing out of the dirt,
Standing high above the earth,
Hollow all the way up the girth,
Birds have given birth,
In your hollow girth,
Warm from the elements of earth,
Im sorry to the birds,
I need that large girth,
Do i have the nerve,
To suicide cut around your girth,
A fire i deserve,
Winter you will serve,
Thankyou mother earth.
Colin Bradley.
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colinb
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2013-02-25 15:30:21]
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Re: TREE
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by Waynster on
Monday, 25th February 2013 @ 06:18:44 PM AEST
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| Didn't quite follow, maybe a bit over imaginative. |
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Re: TREE
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 26th February 2013 @ 01:13:47 AM AEST
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Oh Colin did you kill my tree???
Short but nicely done(cept the killing of me tree) I am a tree hugger ya know LOL
Michelle |
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Re: TREE
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 1st June 2014 @ 04:24:54 PM AEST
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an interesting nature poem, i felt
bad for the birds though....
hugs n' love nessa |
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