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Love Hurts
Contributed by
LetYourFeelingsOut
on
Monday, 25th February 2013 @ 10:48:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Feeling free
Can finally breath
The worry gone
So are you
No tears are falling
My smile is showing
I cant believe how good this feels
My shoulders are lighter
My heart repairing
So much extra room in my mind
Wasted space filled
Memories floating around
It wasn't all bad
But no love could be found
My heart is hurting
But i feel fine
So glad i can breath without being neglected
Less worries more smiles
No more tears for the useless
I am finally free
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LetYourFeelingsOut
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2013-02-25 10:48:44]
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Re: Love Hurts
(User Rating: 1 )
by Waynster on
Monday, 25th February 2013 @ 06:21:50 PM AEST
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| Your user name clearly explains the style you use. You are basically writing exactly your thoughts, but not expressing your words. I believe you could express yourself much more and use your words in a way where it will make your poem more beautiful. |
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Re: Love Hurts
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by colinb on
Tuesday, 26th March 2013 @ 03:55:56 AM AEST
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| Beatifully sad emotions & leaves a kinda of mystery to the reader of the full depth of emotions. |
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