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Nightmares
Contributed by
Sophia_Gracee
on
Sunday, 24th February 2013 @ 10:55:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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To scared to move
Voice doesn't work
Limbs shaking
Monsters lurk
Cant move
Even if I try
Terror playing
An evil lullaby
I hear yelling
The taunting screams
The worst part is
It's not a dream
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Sophia_Gracee
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2013-02-24 22:55:18]
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Re: Nightmares
(User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflyperfect on
Sunday, 24th February 2013 @ 11:31:35 PM AEST
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I like the imagery that is portrayed here.
I also like how you ended it contradicting the title, it is a nice touch.
Thanks for sharing,
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Re: Nightmares
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by thehotshotpoet on
Monday, 25th February 2013 @ 03:58:34 AM AEST
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mind grabbing,very well done
thanks for sharing
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Re: Nightmares
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by thezenmonkey on
Tuesday, 26th February 2013 @ 03:16:18 PM AEST
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| Dark but a good read |
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Re: Nightmares
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by desciple on
Wednesday, 27th February 2013 @ 01:31:05 PM AEST
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| i enjoyed it, Intense, real...great write |
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