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Noticeable Brick Wall

Contributed by jms957 on Tuesday, 19th February 2013 @ 03:46:55 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Noticeable Brick Wall

I could see your beauty
at first sight I knew,
it was way beyond average
so natural, so true.

I knew you were neglected
never told how much you mean.
Unfortunately you have felt
as if you have never been seen.

Compliments nervous you,
I can hear it in your voice.
Your past is your past
and your choice is your choice.

This brick wall you’ve built up
is strong by can be taken down.
If the right person starts from the top
brick by brick to find the ground.

Don’t move too fast
precision and patience are key.
The bricks themselves are fragile
because its been mistreated I can see.

The way these bricks have been layed
unseeingly cannot be taken back,
but the future pattern that you choose
can change the future of how they stack.

All of these things are noticeable
but not everyone’s eye can see,
that if you weren't worth the time
your time is worth everything to me.

Unusually harder to read,
these bricks begin to unfold
slowly, but surely,
your past is beginning to be told.

As trusting and strong the wall may seem
bricks can only withstand so much.
Just when you think it’s at its strongest
it can be broken with just a touch.

So when these bricks are ready enough
to break away from this wall
I will be here to comfort, hold, and listen
but most importantly catch you, when you fall.

-Joseph Matthew Sawyer Jr.

Copyright Â© jms957 ... [ 2013-02-19 15:46:55]
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Re: Noticeable Brick Wall (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 20th February 2013 @ 01:21:25 AM AEST
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I like this very much and can relate to it a lot. Know someone much like that. May wish to fix that typo though, unless of course you meant to type This brick wall you’ve built up is strong by can be taken down. .

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