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jumping

Contributed by wferr777 on Tuesday, 19th February 2013 @ 08:05:34 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Looking around, seeing everyone shivering around you.
All of them cheering you on and saying “jump, jump”.
You start to run feeling the wood beneath your feet creaking as you take every step.
Finally you are jumping in the air and you look down.
The wood being replaced with water underneath your feet.
Flying in the air as if you’re a bird.
When suddenly a sharp cold feeling hits your foot starts to travel up your body.
Before you know it you are engulfed in water and you start swimming as fast as you can.
Hopping out of the water and running up the stairs.
Your feet hitting the warm and creaky wood.
Laying down imediatley to absorb all the warmth that you can.
Watching the blue sky and and being relaxed.
The water dripping off of your body.
Just as you start to become dry you jump off again because of the feeling of being in the air.
The day goes on and everybody goes home.
All is at rest and so are you.

Copyright Â© wferr777 ... [ 2013-02-19 08:05:34]
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Re: jumping (User Rating: 1 )
by Tarheel_Treat on Tuesday, 19th February 2013 @ 01:37:15 PM AEST
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Wow! great imagery...I really enjoyed your poem!

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