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Despare

Contributed by kihr on Monday, 18th February 2013 @ 03:00:37 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Why do I feel as If I am the only one?
I feel as if my world is coming undone
The harder I swim, its as if I am sinking
I am good enough, that was my thinking

The further along the time grinds on
the more that I feel like I am a moron
I thought that It would be hard indeed
But the effort would do it, im about to concede

Everyday I wake up all the same
Sitting in class, wondering why that I came
The further into each lecture we go
The more I feel like I am about to blow

I know that it should not be so easy
I expected them to be hard, im feeling queasy
Just today, I think, all I have to do is try
Instead, this day has made me want to cry

My heart is heavy, my body is tired
I wish I could be truly inspired
Instead of this weight pulling me down
Making me feel like every class' clown

I am sinking further into despair
I am a fish drowning away in the air
Why can't I just get catch my breath
Before I struggle to my death

I can't keep this up, my worlds in upheaval
This just cannot be right, this place is evil
When will it be that my heart is at rest
can I survive this ultimate test?

Copyright © kihr ... [ 2013-02-18 15:00:37]
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Re: Despare (User Rating: 1 )
by JulietNwaora on Tuesday, 19th February 2013 @ 04:48:35 PM AEST
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this really touches the heart

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