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Reality
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
on
Thursday, 14th February 2013 @ 10:50:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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we lost our feeling
in such a way
your eye's grew colder
every day
the things I adored
that meant so much
the smile's the laughter
the precious touch
the little things
that made me complete
like the words I wrote
that you thought were sweet
now they mean nothing
they're worthless to you
where did I go wrong
what did I do
you've taken away
the life I had
I keep asking myself
was I really that bad
questions I ask
but no answers I see
this is my life
my Reality
Roy Randolph Andrews AKA(thehotshotpoet)
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thehotshotpoet
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2013-02-14 22:50:21]
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Re: Reality
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by desire on
Friday, 15th February 2013 @ 11:57:11 AM AEST
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| this is truly a beautiful write, and i love it all we can do in this life is our best, people can accept it or not...never stop being you |
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Re: Reality
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by dvtpdw on
Friday, 15th February 2013 @ 12:07:51 PM AEST
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| Your words carry longing and honesty. Your seach visible in each line. As always, a great write. It touched me. Thanks for sharing, P |
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