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The Dreaming Theory
Contributed by
NightMareShoGun
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Wednesday, 13th February 2013 @ 11:56:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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it seems like an simple theroie of life
or maybe its just the things im dreaming
if im just dreaming where did everything go
or maybe it just go because im in my mind
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Re: The Dreaming Theory
(User Rating: 1 ) by Tarheel_Treat on
Tuesday, 19th February 2013 @ 01:53:06 PM AEST (User
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Hi, I was just wondering did you mean to put "theroie" in L1 and if so, what does it mean? Also, this isn't a Haiku. They have a syllable scheme of 5-7-5. If you condense it, this could possibly be a great haiku! :-) Thanks for the read. |
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