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Unfair

Contributed by 7_of_9 on Tuesday, 12th February 2013 @ 11:15:09 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems



I’m sitting here again
The bench is my friend
Waiting to hear from you
You don’t even know
What I’d do for you
What you won’t do for me

You haven’t even tried to find me
You really started taking your toll

When you go home
Call me and tell me you love me and it’s true
Nobody cares, nobody knows
What you do to me
It’s unfair

Did I wake you while you were asleep?
Pretending you were alone
Is he ok?
Does he give you what you want?
All the time to set it off
And he’s your victim

You still don’t try to find him
He’s given all he could give

When you go home
Call him and tell him you love him and it’s true
Nobody cares, nobody knows
What you do to him
It’s unfair

He’s standing on the bridge
Snow falling fast
Won’t you come take him home?
If you really love me,
If you really love him,
It’s so cold
Just take him home

When you go home
Call me and tell me you love me and it’s true
Nobody cares, nobody knows
What you do to me
It’s so unfair

It’s so unfair




Copyright © 7_of_9 ... [ 2013-02-12 23:15:09]
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Re: Unfair (User Rating: 1 )
by IamM on Wednesday, 13th February 2013 @ 12:58:54 AM AEST
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Wow, this is such a deep-cutting piece. You can really feel the words and visualize the scenes. I felt like I was going down multiple paths but all at once they ended up at the same ending. Thank you so much for sharing.

-M




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