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GOANNAS
Contributed by
colinb
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Friday, 8th February 2013 @ 12:55:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The sun as bright as can be
Shinning through the leaves
Goannas are in the trees
Looking for a feed
From a distance i can see
They are looking at the dogs feed
Wonder if they will try to achieve
At stealing the dogs feed
The dogs they can see
My dogs are as mean can be
Wont allow the goannas to have a feed
Waiting for them at the bottom of the tree
One goanna slowly comes down the tree
This goanna might end up being dogs feed
If he comes down the tree
The trees are a safe place to be
High amongst the leaves
Today might not be
To steal the dogs feed
Colin Bradley
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Re: GOANNAS
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by alicewhite on
Friday, 8th February 2013 @ 02:58:31 PM AEST
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| hi i think your poem is great,, and i am not just saying that because i also want you to read mine called horse meat DNA ,although i do--- i have read your poem and really enjoyed it,, however if you have not seen the uk drama called utopia then you should and if you read my poem and take in the gist of it then when you watch utopia you will be able to see the truth it relays just as the manuscript within the programme relays hidden truths,,, anyway take care and see what you make of the poem and the programme utopia yourself and enjoy xx |
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Re: GOANNAS
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 1st June 2014 @ 05:02:08 PM AEST
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this one is really cool, i had to look up goannas, now
that i see what they are i like this poem even more,
hugs n' love nessa |
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