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Old Age
Contributed by
obbynno
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Friday, 8th February 2013 @ 04:58:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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Old age dances with unbalanced steps!
Fragile frame of lengthy years,
Weakling strides of aged veins,
Wrinkling face of tired skin,
Daily strain of shrinking strength,
Gradual journey to mother earth!
Daily prayer for a better end!
Old age sways with unfathomed pace!
Fragile branch of lengthy years,
Rumpling leaves of aging veins,
Drying face of tearing skin,
Daily shrink of failing strength,
Gradual trip to mother earth,
Daily thanks for a better rest!
Copyright ©
obbynno
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2013-02-08 04:58:57]
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Re: Old Age
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by emystar on
Friday, 8th February 2013 @ 07:48:17 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
I'd say you got this down pat.
Great job.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Old Age
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by dvtpdw on
Friday, 8th February 2013 @ 07:53:49 PM AEST
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| Yesterday and today, with the promise of tomorrow - how your words take us there. You give us hope. Great write. Thank you for sharing, P |
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Re: Old Age
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 8th February 2013 @ 07:54:12 PM AEST
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A vivid reminder of the fragility of life and the short space of time we have in which to live it.
Great write, made me think!!
Steve |
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