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Peaceful Avalanche
Contributed by
deusdeira
on
Thursday, 7th February 2013 @ 01:01:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Singing thunder's dark abode,
where lightning struck and somehow froze,
a tempest caught in slowing time,
where even sunlight fears to shine,
come hopeless thought... cascading storm,
and drift upon... an ocean... torn,
come slip into... this endless silence,
dreams will stop... in muted violence,
and yet light shines... upon these crags,
come avalanche... to rip and drag,
to tumble upon earth so cold,
to rip the trees and make them fold,
a mountain falls... to clash with fire,
crashing snow... amid desire,
it comes to bring down storms of rain,
yet calm will live inside the pain,
Soft as snow... warm as fire,
to lift my sorrow... in endless spire,
drink in sadness... let it flow,
and in that cold black river... grow,
light sparkling on the surface glows,
to break upon your silent foe,
wrap him soft... with precious care,
slowly healing what was there,
a grip so soft... no touch can feel,
yet when it's there... you know it's real,
let sorrow drift... upon the stream,
release your woes... into the dream.
Copyright ©
deusdeira
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2013-02-07 13:01:02]
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Re: Peaceful Avalanche
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th February 2013 @ 02:52:50 PM AEST
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Your writing just keeps getting better and better.
Awesome work of ART.
Blessings, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Peaceful Avalanche
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by psychdocg on
Friday, 8th February 2013 @ 03:49:08 AM AEST
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| I love the beautiful nature imagery and the sense of rhyming which adds a nice resonance. i feel the sense of emotional resolution from the initial pain towards peaceful acceptance. |
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Re: Peaceful Avalanche
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 8th February 2013 @ 07:37:59 PM AEST
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Powerful images cascading through the lines like a torrent of thought.
I found this really powerful and I'm glad I read it.
Good work.
Steve |
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Re: Peaceful Avalanche
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by Voyager on
Friday, 10th January 2014 @ 10:50:02 PM AEST
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| great imagery and the detail of description. |
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