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A Plea For Death
Contributed by
Salena
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Sunday, 3rd February 2013 @ 06:01:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I hate my life
I want a knife
Kill me now
Just take my life
Hunt me down
Make me drown
I guess I'll die
With a frown
You won't kill me
Despite my plea
What can I do
To make you see
These tears I cry
I want to die
Tie me down
Hang me high
Copyright ©
Salena
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2013-02-03 06:01:20]
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Re: A Plea For Death
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by kihr on
Sunday, 3rd February 2013 @ 12:46:02 PM AEST
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Life is worth living!
Now that is done, It would be sad if you were to die, then we would have no more of your poems! Call me selfish, but I would like more so I don't allow you to die.
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Re: A Plea For Death
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by deusdeira on
Monday, 4th February 2013 @ 06:28:21 AM AEST
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| Life is about perspective. I do not know yours, so i will not deem to tell you how to live your life, but i will say this... perspective can change. You have the power to make it happen. |
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Re: A Plea For Death
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by AngelFox on
Tuesday, 5th February 2013 @ 11:57:08 AM AEST
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| Judging from your writing you should make this "A Plea For "Life". If you read everyone of your sentences individually, they describe despair. And you put all those feelings together and was able to write a very powerful poem. " A plea for life" because poems like this remind us that we are not the only ones going thru such turmoil in our lives. Thank you for sharing and looking forward to reading another one of your great poems. |
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