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NO PERFECT LOVE POEM
Contributed by
colinb
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Saturday, 2nd February 2013 @ 03:10:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Dreaming to write the perfect love poem,
Sitting here trying to think of the perfect love poem for a woman ive never met,
Trying to write that perfect love poem,
Praying to god to help me write the perfect love peom for the woman ive never met,
Trying to write the perfect love poem from my heart & soul,
So i try to look for that perfect love poem for the woman ive never met,
Here i sit looking on the web to look for that perfect love poem,
Browsing this page that page for that perfect love poem for the woman ive never met,
Looking at this poem that poem for that perfect love poem,
Still looking for that perfect love poem for the woman ive never met,
Desperatley trying to find that perfect love poem,
Starting to relize their is no perfect love poem for the woman ive never met,
Relizeing their is no perfect love poem to descibe the pure love,
Here i sit starting to relize the perfect love poem is in my mind,body & soul,
The perfect love poem will remain in my heart & soul.
Colin Bradley.
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colinb
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2013-02-02 15:10:26]
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Re: NO PERFECT LOVE POEM
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by Masonator on
Saturday, 2nd February 2013 @ 04:15:03 PM AEST
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| I know this isn't supposed to be perfect but try using some punctuation and capitalization. |
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Re: NO PERFECT LOVE POEM
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd February 2013 @ 06:57:59 PM AEST
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so good to know someone thinks like I do. No need for punctuation to have meaning. and when you meet this lovely person one day, and if things work out for you two, you will find a way to write many things to that person --- each a tiny piece, obvious explanations, maybe little notes left here and there, perhaps a special form of communication, that builds the backbone of the love you share, never perfect, yet wonderfully, always a work in progress.
Thanks for sharing these thoughts --- hold on to them!
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Re: NO PERFECT LOVE POEM
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 5th July 2014 @ 05:01:01 PM AEST
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you've put much thought and time into this poem,
keep that poem that is in your heart and soul, too,
hugs n' love nessa |
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