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Yearning
Contributed by
velvet_rose94
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Thursday, 31st January 2013 @ 10:40:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My chest aches
Longing.
My bones audibly creak with want
Want of what?
Touch.
People chatter
An incessant droning,
But I am alone.
Why am I so alone?
A room full of companions
But none for me.
Where is the one that completes me?
The perfect design,
The other puzzle piece
Dropped under the table
Lost.
Where are you?
I love…
I want…
I need…
You.
Copyright ©
velvet_rose94
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2013-01-31 22:40:34]
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Re: Yearning
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 31st January 2013 @ 11:42:07 PM AEST
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Ah, the heart and desires of a poet. Well written idea!
Thanks,
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Re: Yearning
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by Masonator on
Saturday, 2nd February 2013 @ 04:40:18 PM AEST
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| This poem describes how I'm feeling right now. I feel so alone and I want him so bad. Very nice poem keep up the good work :) |
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Re: Yearning
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 8th February 2013 @ 07:45:03 PM AEST
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You certainly fired out the emotion in this one, very powerful and moving
Glad I took the time to read it!!
Steve |
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