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FORBIDDEN LOVE
Contributed by
colinb
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Wednesday, 30th January 2013 @ 05:23:07 PM in AEST
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It's forbidden love but i dont care,
This secret i must bare,
The love i wish i could declare
But my heart is so scared,
A heart in despair,
I cant controll the feelings in their,
This love i can't share,
No way would i dare,
The name i dare not share,
Her heart i dont want to scare,
Words from her i care,
They float from her like air,
Because she has so much flair,
Her soul you cant compare,
My angel floating in the air,
I really need her to be there,
My love how i wish i could share.
Colin Bradley
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colinb
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2013-01-30 17:23:07]
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Re: FORBIDDEN LOVE
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by emystar on
Thursday, 31st January 2013 @ 02:58:59 AM AEST
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Good work.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: FORBIDDEN LOVE
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by kihr on
Friday, 1st February 2013 @ 09:45:51 PM AEST
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| From the heart usually makes it flow out faster, as is my experience. I think you could try and mix up the sounds the "Air" sound kept coming up. If that's your intention then I don't see anything wrong with something like that, I like patterns. :) |
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Re: FORBIDDEN LOVE
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 4th July 2014 @ 06:08:37 PM AEST
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awww.... secretly in love from afar, this can go on for
years, maybe you should tell her, ...this is one sweet
poem!
hugs n' love nessa |
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