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For the Girl in the Cafe
Contributed by
stalkee
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Monday, 28th January 2013 @ 02:11:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Why don't you come a little closer?
You and me and me and you
We can watch the noon light
as it twists into moonlight
And we can watch the artificial stars
As they flicker and conduct the choir
And dance to the rhythm of our heart
And then I'll sweep you off your feet
We can talk awhile and take it slow
We can talk awhile, give into time's flow
I've written songs and written words
About a girl I've never met
Then there was that red dress, you had it on
And all I could hear was "Babylon"
So, I'm letting go of my head and heart
In hopes of knowing what could start
Suddenly, I find the stars aligned
And I'm missing nothing I've left behind
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stalkee
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2013-01-28 02:11:53]
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Re: For the Girl in the Cafe
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th January 2013 @ 10:43:40 PM AEST
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You should show her this! It's great!
Tim |
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Re: For the Girl in the Cafe
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by ElementZero on
Tuesday, 29th January 2013 @ 08:04:04 AM AEST
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| Great job on the poem. It's a really good poem, that definitely could get the girl. Ask her out! |
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Re: For the Girl in the Cafe
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by LetYourFeelingsOut on
Tuesday, 29th January 2013 @ 02:10:36 PM AEST
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| Ask her out bud this peomcould melt anyone's heart your definaaly gonna be able to get her with this .......Show her this or read it to her in person shell fall for you in a heart beat ..your such a thoughtful person I can tell we woman need more men like you in this world Goood luck I hope it works out for you to and remember if it doesn't I'm sure some other lucky girl will be glad to :3 or you'll end up being great friends :) Love the prom keep up the good work !!! |
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Re: For the Girl in the Cafe
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 5th July 2014 @ 01:14:41 PM AEST
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| absolutely beautiful, hugs n' love nessa |
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