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Going Through the Motions
Contributed by
Whiskurz
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Saturday, 26th January 2013 @ 09:25:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A momentary lapse of reason
Has brought me back to you
Even though I'll always know
The hurt you've put me through
With blinded eyes I come again
My heart won't let me leave
I can't deny the tears I cry
The evidence, on my sleeve
Doubt has now replaced the hope
That made my world worth while
Dread and fear will reappear
And steal away my smile
Like a puppet on a lonely stage
My strings are in your hands
I have no will to even feel
Just following your commands
Broken dreams your voice commands
My will no more my own
A lonely seed, a useless weed
That you alone have sown
I'm just going through the motions
Tired and feeling used
I tried today to stay away
But again, my heart refused
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Whiskurz
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2013-01-26 21:25:56]
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Re: Going Through the Motions
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by emystar on
Sunday, 27th January 2013 @ 12:22:05 AM AEST
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Very sad but great writing.
Big huggs,
emy |
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Re: Going Through the Motions
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by xHeathenx on
Sunday, 27th January 2013 @ 06:34:54 AM AEST
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| Very nice flow and rhyme structure. The conflict of desire and love can be so problematic at times, but it's necessary to do what one can to try and push towards fighting for one's self, because if they aren't doing the same for you, then nobody ever will. |
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