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Frozen Breath
Contributed by
drifting
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Friday, 25th January 2013 @ 03:38:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Alone
In the snow
Gnawing again
Brain slowly melting away
Trickling down...alone
All pale, only smoke I see in the horizon
Of a warm dwelling it is
Or of seething hell?
A lost soul passed this land, wrenched
By the beauty of truth it was
Or by falsehood
I would not know
Scarred deeply
For its shrieks were too terrible
To hear amongst the bloodied forests
Close eyes now
Breathe thy frozen breath
Be it the last
Do not come back
For life has forever been marred
Copyright ©
drifting
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2013-01-25 15:38:32]
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Re: Frozen Breath
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by shelby on
Friday, 25th January 2013 @ 07:39:22 PM AEST
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Dark and wonderful, tinged with a echo of sadness. Nicely done
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Re: Frozen Breath
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by emystar on
Saturday, 26th January 2013 @ 04:12:12 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Good writing.
I often think about the homeless people in the Winter time.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Frozen Breath
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by Ambivalence on
Saturday, 26th January 2013 @ 06:39:49 PM AEST
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Had a vivid imagery as I read this well written piece. Your diction is unique, I like your style. Keep it up!
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