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I REMEMBER WHEN .....
Contributed by
BellaSpirit
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Tuesday, 22nd January 2013 @ 12:27:56 AM in AEST
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I Remember when i used to be happy.
I remember when i used to wake up everyday
without a care in the world , without a worry ,
without a reason .... without something eating up my soul .
I Remember when nothing bothered me , now even the Smallest
Things drives me crazy . when hair and make-up wasn't necessary
to go out , when my appearance didn't matter. when simple things like
going to mcdonals , to beach , or the park made me feel like the happiest little girl
in the wolrd. when waking up wasn't a struggle.
I Remember when i used to get along with my mother ,
now we can barely look a each others faces .
when going to school wasn't a pain in the ass, when
the future seemed so right & i could see myself being anything ....
A doctor ? a lawyer ? a designer ? whatever i wanted , it was just up to me.
Those days were my sweet days .
Now my insecurities rule my life,
Going out scares me , what people might think about me
scares me , not being able to be someone in life scares me .
Even being myself scares me.
Is like my hopes got murdered & my dreams got kidnaped
& i would never ever ever see them again.
Is like the only question that runs inside my mind is
what am i living for ? Is like i wish i could end up with all this pain
but i cant ! cause im too scare.
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BellaSpirit
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2013-01-22 00:27:56]
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Re: I REMEMBER WHEN .....
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by TheDreamer on
Tuesday, 22nd January 2013 @ 12:33:19 AM AEST
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Very nice write. A very good effort. Keep writing and you'll only improve. Be careful for spelling and grammar next time to.
And by the way it truly is never too late to achieve those dreams.
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Re: I REMEMBER WHEN .....
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 22nd January 2013 @ 12:43:37 AM AEST
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Your poem packs an emotional punch my friend. It's not easy to pour your soul out for everyone to see.
Take care to edit before you post though ;)
Nicely done
Roses
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Re: I REMEMBER WHEN .....
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd January 2013 @ 01:26:54 AM AEST
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I didn't have a problem with the speling as Your writing is great.
Welcome to YPDC.
Smiles,
emy |
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Re: I REMEMBER WHEN .....
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by TheSoulEater08 on
Tuesday, 22nd January 2013 @ 02:08:40 PM AEST
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| Awesome i loved it is there any way that you could give mine a look? it's called BANG |
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Re: I REMEMBER WHEN .....
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by shelby on
Friday, 25th January 2013 @ 06:53:42 PM AEST
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welcoe to ypdc, I agree it hard to pour your soul out for others, you did well, deep and honest write.... we all feel this way at times, be yourself and let others follow you!!
Michelle |
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