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Patience
Contributed by
TheDreamer
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Sunday, 20th January 2013 @ 10:55:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Good things come to those who wait,
But leave it too long and you might end up being late,
I ask why as I grow up why everyone seems colder,
They tell me you might not get it now but you'll understand when you're older,
They say patience is a virtue and you must learn to wait,
But it is far too easy to be lazy, drift off or just procrastinate,
I'm hungry, have desire and want to achieve,
Because it seems the older we get the less we continue to believe,
I want to do something great I want achievements to be hung,
I am not naive just determined, I am youthful, not just young,
They say patience is a virtue and you must learn to wait,
But if I wait too long, I fear it will be too late
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Re: Patience
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by Somni on
Monday, 21st January 2013 @ 01:13:28 AM AEST
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Love it :)
Beautifully written, flows very well, and has a great message that we can all relate to. |
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Re: Patience
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by Aunt-Mollie on
Monday, 21st January 2013 @ 04:39:02 PM AEST
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| I liked your concept and the way you presented it - very much! It is like the old adage: Live each day as if it were your last; for, after all, how do you know it is not? |
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Re: Patience
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 30th January 2013 @ 11:37:12 PM AEST
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A good poem like this reminds me of the pros and cons of waiting for something/someone.
My saying is, "You can't have PAIN without PAtIeNce."
I'm fairly young myself and still learning.
Truth is you can't wait forever, timing is everything.
Take care
-Ambivalence
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Re: Patience
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 8th May 2014 @ 12:55:47 AM AEST
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well woven words, you have a creative heart that
you will follow in life, so i wouldn't worry too much
on being late,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Patience
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 5th July 2014 @ 10:28:44 PM AEST
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Really creative! I love the way your mind works....
JenniK |
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Re: Patience
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 13th July 2014 @ 11:20:32 AM AEST
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A subject I explore often....well phrased, Dreamer. We could be two peas in pod for our thoughts and things that consume us.
As before, (and I'm sure of more) I dug this piece and look forward to reading more and more as your mind unwraps the gifts of insight you give yourself.
Invierno |
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