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faded
Contributed by
apartment213
on
Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 03:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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locked case lazy eyes
long walks everyday cloudy
she sings for him
he answers her call
he swerves all around
he's nervous he sees light
night falls on this boy
conversation dried up
lucky as he has been
there's no place for him
he cries with a question on his chest
falls short falls apart
excuses kill non existant laugh
crack jokes at a school bell
he's faded he's faded
he cracks his jokes
his questions go on and on
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2003-05-13 03:35:00]
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Re: faded
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by DOCTERKRISITN on
Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 06:49:59 PM AEST
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i think i know who thats about
it's really good and i am happy for you too
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Re: faded
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by AngryPrincess on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 03:40:03 AM AEST
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great write kenny....i think kristin still thinks its about a boyee and a girlie....oh well...very very good my love....paint mongoose
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Re: faded
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by PhantomsLDY on
Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 03:20:57 AM AEST
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| Drug addiction can be as painful as an unhealthy love affair. Great write Kenny!! |
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