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Expectations
Contributed by
softerware
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Thursday, 17th January 2013 @ 10:29:11 PM in AEST
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All great artists suffered;
Forged their craft with pain;
And the more they suffered;
The better they became!
I have burned the midnight oil
on rhythm, rhyme and such;
Kindly bear in mind though,
I haven't suffered much!
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Re: Expectations
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by Mick_Puttock on
Friday, 18th January 2013 @ 11:58:50 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this little "disclaimer" and can fully relate to it.
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com,
Mick |
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Re: Expectations
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 17th May 2014 @ 03:43:15 PM AEST
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Catchy and cute! reminds me of Emily Dickenson a bit.
Nicely done. |
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Re: Expectations
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th June 2014 @ 10:45:36 PM AEST
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had to go back to your first post to see. I wonder if it's true, or if it's the progeny...
To suffer not, to flower instep instead
somewhere. A degree or expectation
could be reclusive or the opposite, to flower.
This is a nice one!
I'll read more tonight to see if I can get something unique, like a struggle.
Peace! |
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Re: Expectations
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 3rd July 2014 @ 07:54:43 PM AEST
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that's what i hear too, i've even had some people get upset with me
when i wrote happy poetry lol, seems to hold some truth as we are
more in touch with ourselves as poets n' when miserable dig deeper,
whatever, this is a great write, has an excellent rhythm actually,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Expectations
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 22nd November 2017 @ 04:22:30 AM AEST
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I wasn/'/t here then but had to go back to read your first poem. I/'/m glad I did.
When I/'/m happy I/'/m not excited to write. Actually most don/'/t want to read it either. I guess happiness doesn/'/t torture the soul enough to tell the world your plight. January 17, 2013 was a great day!
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Re: Expectations
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by Durango on
Monday, 14th May 2018 @ 05:23:12 AM AEST
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Maybe you haven/'/t suffered much because poetry come natural for you.
Poetry might be deeper with more emotions when we are in pain or not so happy but I/'/ll take a smile face day over a frown face day. |
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Re: Expectations
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by ingeniusidiot on
Thursday, 7th February 2019 @ 03:31:19 PM AEST
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It is easier to write after traumatic, tragic, or just
upsetting time. But to be able to write with an
optimistic and cheery disposition shows a truly
talented and well rounded poet. With suffering comes
pieces that are easily relatable but the world
also need those that can cheer up and lift the spirit.
You my friend are one of those people.
Rich |
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Re: Expectations
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by deusdeira on
Wednesday, 18th August 2021 @ 05:10:55 PM AEST
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| Interesting. I never read your first poem before. I like it. Clever. |
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