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Mermaid
Contributed by
LilaPearl
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Tuesday, 15th January 2013 @ 01:08:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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In the dawn
I was a mermaid
Inside the calm dark muddy water
I found light and peace
I grew and walked the land
Where I met a man
In my water colored eyes
He saw mystery
Deep, he submerged into the abyss
And did drown in his own lies
When my mystique was unveiled
He tossed me to the sharks
This new water
Was cold and unfamiliar
So to land my flippers
Adapted again
My beautiful pain attracted
The fisher men
That tossed their line
To feed their ego
New water is what I need
But I am afraid my tears will soil it
My eyes burn from the salt
Eyes, that no longer see truth
Searching again for calm dark muddy water
That will warm my tail fins
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LilaPearl
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2013-01-15 01:08:53]
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Re: Mermaid
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by Whiskurz on
Tuesday, 15th January 2013 @ 11:59:56 AM AEST
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| This is such a sad but Beautiful piece......You have talent my friend......Whisk |
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Re: Mermaid
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by ScarlettDrawl on
Tuesday, 15th January 2013 @ 05:22:23 PM AEST
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| Very deep...I liked it a lot. Well done. :) |
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Re: Mermaid
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by Sasha on
Friday, 18th January 2013 @ 04:50:44 AM AEST
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| This is perfect poetry! stunning work, LilaPearl! |
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