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in the water
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Thursday, 10th January 2013 @ 12:02:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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can't sleep, i smash the radio
couldn't eat, so i drank the poison
i lost myself, and he died
now the lake is dry and the window spent, the dragon fell before the lion went. the ship sunk, but the captain can
the vessel's down, and the currents polish, the wake upon, with waves above, i sway in the flow
lost and last and always waiting
for song to break, to ease my dead and broken heart
i shed no tear for yesterday nor tomorrow
i close my eyes and the waters calm again
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2013-01-10 00:02:35] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: in the water
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 24th May 2014 @ 11:05:20 AM AEST (User
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i really like it, you have some beautiful lines, but
who is the he that's just like out of place, i
love the dragon/lion and the whole ship image, it
has a graceful and peaceful feeling about it,
hugs n' love nessa |
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