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Dark Love
Contributed by
Ash
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Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 12:35:00 AM in AEST
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Take me home to the shadows, the darkest night.
Wrap me up in the nothing, that makes everything right.
Lay me down in the blackness, where I'm not alone.
Take me in the twilight, make me sigh and moan..
Copyright ©
Ash
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2003-05-13 00:35:00]
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Re: Dark Love
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 03:04:13 PM AEST
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Poems like these (the ones that rhyme) are ofthen the hardest to read. Just jot down any ideas you might have. It might take a while but in the end it'll be a great poem! Good luck.
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Re: Dark Love
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by exiled on
Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 06:18:34 PM AEST
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You know this is really good. It is a lot like I write and I really enjoy this. This may sound like self-promotion but it's not. I am not going to personally give you any lines in here because I got it finished in my head after reading it. Just go to my home and read some of my stuff maybe it will inspire you somehow and help you finish. Best of luck;p.
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