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Five Alive
Contributed by
xXxLittlexRedxXx
on
Tuesday, 8th January 2013 @ 11:41:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Somebody asked me the other day,
If I had superpowers what would they be?
That's Easy-
Walking Through Walls and Invisibility....
Every morning I'd drink my Five Alive,
Load up invisible bullets into my .45.
And tilt my seat back as I let Batman drive....
Could we change the world? You Bet!
I know you all can't see it yet.
Materializing through exterior walls,
On a moral high horse conquest.
I'd kick that drunken hillbilly right in the balls,
About to commit another atrocity incest.
Batman could be quite the asset,
He could fly us to the #1 airbase.
With all his knowledge of the invisible jet,
I could neutralize missiles and slow the arms race.
Every night I would come Alive,
I'd help people wherever I could.
I'd slip into banks and secret archives,
I'd transfer money into accounts
like a modern day Robin Hood.
Copyright ©
xXxLittlexRedxXx
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2013-01-08 23:41:17]
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Re: Five Alive
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th January 2013 @ 11:46:38 PM AEST
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Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! I vote for you! My account number is.... ;-)
Enjoyed this a lot. Thanks for the smiles.
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Re: Five Alive
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by HawLeeScreams on
Wednesday, 9th January 2013 @ 06:36:59 PM AEST
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| I find the word structure of the poem to be very well. The alternative twist of Robin Hood makes anyone that reads this remember the childhood stories that they were once told. By referring to two different "super hero's ," it is simple to catch readers of many ages, because at least they've heard of one or the other. Overall I highly enjoyed reading this, so please keep writing and keep up the excellent work. |
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