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All For YOU:
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Tuesday, 8th January 2013 @ 07:17:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Give me all you got
i've earn THAT.
I die that you may LIVE
I came to you with a GIFT
I promise to take you THERE
I came with a message HERE
Your king in and earth suite DEAR
Now that am back HERE
my spirit lives in you THERE.
Don't you SWEAR
I am alway NEAR.
Copyright ©
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2013-01-08 19:17:18] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: All For YOU:
(User Rating: 1 ) by xXxLittlexRedxXx on
Tuesday, 8th January 2013 @ 09:35:44 PM AEST (User
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That poem was really good. I loved the way you incorporated different texts into it. It gave it a great feeling. I think that your poem is breath-taking. :3 |
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Re: All For YOU:
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Tuesday, 8th January 2013 @ 09:39:03 PM AEST (User
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Very thought provoking.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: All For YOU:
(User Rating: 1 ) by colinb on
Thursday, 31st January 2013 @ 07:32:21 PM AEST (User
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beautifully written powerfull |
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