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I love you dearly and I like you kinda
Contributed by
Jilli_bean
on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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He loved her dearly
she liked him kinda
he bought her flowers
she smiled and
threw them out
he drew her pictures
and wrote her songs
she giggled and
threw them out
He asked her to dinner
she said "ya sure why not"
he bought a new outfit,
got everything ready
she sat around didn't think twice
he went to pick her up
she got in
he went to ask her something
She barked out orders
he loved her dearly
she liked him kinda
He tried for perfection ...
it was all she deserved
She could care less...as long as her make-up was fine
the night was great they both agreed
he gently asked her to go steady
she nodded, smiled, then winked...why not?
he thought she was perfect, she was to be treated as a queen
she loved to be pampered
Everthing was going great
till the date
she said "no,
sry Jason I can't do that"
I love you ...but I can't
He loved her to much
she got scared
he grew controlling and obsessive
she grew weak and dependent
he became mean and agressive
she became battered and a women
he thought she looked at other guys
she really didnt care ..she had him
he would hit her...beat her,why would someone so perfect act so repulsing,
he would think
she didnt know what to do ...
he liked her kinda
she loved him dearly
Roles reversed...she ended up in a hurse
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Jilli_bean
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2003-05-12 23:05:00]
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Re: I love you dearly and I like you kinda
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by Apartment213 on
Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 09:21:38 PM AEST
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i like it sad and repulsing u know how could someone do that? i look forward to reading more of ur stuff
KENNY |
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Re: I love you dearly and I like you kinda
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by Kirby on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 07:25:39 PM AEST
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| WOW this was a perfect poem. It made my mouth drop open in the end! Extremly good hun! I'm going to go read more of ur poetry now! Keep writing like this! Love::::Kirby |
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Re: I love you dearly and I like you kinda
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 04:40:39 PM AEST
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| ack! this poem literally gave me chills! lol! i think it is wonderful! really great how you gently came around full circle too:) hugs nessa |
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