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7 words
Contributed by
Rafaat
on
Saturday, 5th January 2013 @ 10:27:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
BirthdayPoems
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Today it's me against reality; so I
Can not win even with utmost sincerety.
My crazy heart would surprise you; suppose,
With an unexpected rainbow in the overcast
And you'd laugh, you'd call it insanity.
So instead these 7 words I'll offer-
Happy Birthday to you my lovely sister....
Copyright ©
Rafaat
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2013-01-05 22:27:43] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: 7 words
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kailas on
Sunday, 6th January 2013 @ 12:16:26 PM AEST (User
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This poem is great, I bet your sister loved it. Thanks for sharing! |
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Re: 7 words
(User Rating: 1 ) by mvvenkataraman on
Monday, 7th January 2013 @ 10:19:26 AM AEST (User
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Dear Poet.
Your poem like a rainbow is indeed splendid
Your love for your sister is informed to the Sky
Surely Angels will bring it to your sister's notice
Your poem is nice and I enjoyed its real beauty.
mvvenkataraman |
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Re: 7 words
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Tuesday, 7th May 2013 @ 10:31:16 PM AEST (User
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Love the title leading us on the the finale! |
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